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The Lake Isle of Innisfree. - Остров озерный Иннисфри.

14.10.2013
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Оригинал: The Lake Isle of Innisfree., William Batler Yeats
Перевод с английского: faust-off
Я поднимусь и пойду к Иннисфри. Я пойду –
Хижину там из плетня и из глины сложить,
Грядки вскопаю и пчел я себе заведу;
На поляне лесной буду жить.

Мир обрету и опустится медленно мир
Прямо туда, где сверчок бренчит песню свою;
Ночи – мерцают, жарой там пропитаны дни,
Коноплянки взлетая поют.

Я поднимусь и идти буду до темноты,
Чтобы услышать плеск тихой озерной волны;
Здесь, среди улиц, среди городской суеты,
Он из сердца идет глубины.
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The Lake Isle of Innisfree.
I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made:
Nine bean-rows will I have there, a hive for the honey-bee,
And live alone in the bee-loud glade.

And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
Dropping from the veils of the mourning to where the cricket sings;
There midnight's all a glimmer, and noon a purple glow,
And evening full of the linnet's wings.

I will arise and go now, for always night and day
I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the shore;
While I stand on the roadway, or on the pavements grey,
I hear it in the deep heart's core.

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Андрей Москотельников
Андрей Москотельников говорит:
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14.10.2013 21:07   #
А я бы сказал, что значительно лучше! Вообще надо смелее браться за Ейтса. А то ведь Кружков, там, совершенно неизвестно ещё, чего напереводил, судя по тому же Джойсу.
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19.10.2013 02:53   #
"Блестяще!" Какая музыкальная проникновенная живопись! (чуть-чуть бы с последней строкой что-нибудь сделать...)

И я бы еще добавила пару-тройку знаков препинания (чтоб их отсутствие не портило великолепную картину):
Мир обрету - и опустится медленно мир

и

Коноплянки, взлетая, поют.

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06.11.2013 01:47   #
По поводу коноплянок, пожалуй. "Мир обрету..." Там, скорее, запятая нужна. А с последней строкой-то, что сделать предлагаете?
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06.12.2013 11:24   #
Спасибо тому инкогнито, кто выдал big "С". Премного благодарен...
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