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The Dream Dealer - Охрана ворот

09.12.2012
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Оригинал: The Dream Dealer, Marita Phillips
Перевод с английского: Андрей
Охрана ворот
Непонятные вещи происходили с Финном не только дома. В школе тоже творилось что-то странное. Все началось с Лихача и Кэла, а затем, словно вирус, распространилось и на других детей. Было много слухов и скрытных походов к фургону с мороженным.
Лихач заплатил Финну, чтобы он стоял часовым около школьных ворот и свистел, если увидит взрослого. Чем больше Финн следил за Торговцем Мечтами, тем больше он его интриговал. Как этому человеку удавалось соблазнить детей рассказать о своих самых сокровенных мечтах? Финн продолжать слушать, что одноклассники рассказывали ему о себе, но чему бы он никогда не поверил.
Трикси скомкала немного бумаги и назвала его мусорным ведром, когда выходила за ворота. Десять минут спустя он услышал, как она говорит Торговцу Мечтами: "Почему я хорошо себя чувствую, только, когда унижаю кого-нибудь? Я это ненавижу."
Торговец Мечтами быстро успокоил её, сказав, что Волшебный Боб избавит её от чувства испуга и позволит ей быть такой хорошей, какая она есть на самом деле. И Финн признал, что она стала более терпимой, когда съела Волшебный Боб.
На другой день он видел, как Турк незаметно подходит к Торговцу Мечтами и говорит, что не хочет, чтобы кто-нибудь узнал его мечту.
"Совершенно верно", говорил Торговец Мечтами. "В секретах больше силы. Я здесь, чтобы помочь. Доверься мне."
"Я слабый. Я ненавижу всегда быть позади других", признался Турк.
"Понимаю. Я помог многим, таким как ты", заверил Торговец Мечтами. "Флэйк! У нас есть Звездная Сдача?"
Турк съел её, но Финн не заметил, как тот направился в класс. На самом деле, как только он попадал в Ледяные Мечты, Турк часто пропускал уроки.
Иногда Торговец Мечтами смотрел в направлении Финна так, будто он хотел, чтобы Финн услышал, что было сказано. Но Финн всегда делал вид, что не слушает.
"У меня могут быть прямые волосы?", тихо спрашивала Белла.
"Отличный шанс", подумал Финн.
"Легко. У меня есть одни специально для Вас, молодая дама. Всего за 3.50 фунтов."
"Хлам", сказала девушка из группы поклонников Беллы. "Пошли. Я ухожу отсюда."
"Это свободный мир", сказал Торговец Мечтами передавая Белле Ледяную Мечту. "Какие красивые сережки. Вы - девушка со вкусом."
Белла стала более общительной от внимания Торговца Мечтами.
В эту минуту Финн заметил, что мать с двумя детьми покидает школу и приближается к фургону
Андрей
The Dream Dealer
There weren't only things at home that Finn didn't understand. Something strange was also going on at school. It had started with
Scorcher and Cal and then, like a virus, had spread to some of the other kids. There was a lot of whispering and furtive trips to the Ice-cream Van.
Scorcher paid Finn to stand guard at the school gates and whistle ifhe saw a grown-up. The more Finn observed the Dream Dealer, the more intrigued he became. How did this man entice the kids to confess their innermost thoughts? Finn kept overhearing his classmates telling him things about themselves that he would never have believed.
Trixie had chucked a bit of screwed-up paper and called him a 'waste bin' as she walked out of the gates.
Then minutes later he had heard her saying to the
Dream Dealer,
'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of 'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of
'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of
'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of 'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of 'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of 'Why do I only feel good when I put someone down? I hate it.'
The Dream Dealer had quickly reassured her that a Mystic Bean would stop her feeling threatened and allow her to be as nice as she really was. And Finn had to admit that she was more bearable when she had eaten a Mystic Bean.
Another day he had seen Turk sidling up to the
Dream Dealer and saying he didn't want everyone to know his dream.
'Quite right,' the Dream Dealer had said. 'There's
more power in secrets. I'm here to help. Trust me'
'I'm thick. I hate always being bottom,' Turk had admitted.
'I understand. I've helped plenty like you,' the
Dream Dealer had answered confidentially. 'Flake! Have we got a Starry Surrender?'
Turk had eaten it but Finn didn't notice him moving up in class. In fact, once he got into Ice- Dreams, Turk often missed class altogether.
Sometimes the Dream Dealer would glance towards Finn as if he wanted him to hear what was being said. But Finn always pretended not to be listening.
'Could I get straight hair,' Bela asked quietly.
'Fat chance,' thought Finn.
'Easy. I've got just the one for you, young lady. Only £3.50.'
'Rubbish,' said a girl from Bela's group of admirers. 'Come on. I'm getting out of here.'
'It's a free world,' said the Dream Dealer, handing Bela an Ice-Dream. 'What beautiful earrings. You're a lady with taste.'
Bela visibly expanded with the Dream Dealer's attention.
At that minute Finn noticed a mother with two kids leaving the school and approaching the Van
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Федор
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14.12.2012 13:40   #
Отлично! Довольно длинный текст, переведен хорошо!
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14.12.2012 13:42   #
Спасибо!
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14.12.2012 20:48   #
Отличная работа! Не зря потратил время, странно что на твою работу не обратили внимания)
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14.12.2012 20:58   #
Приношу извинения за неудобства, один фрагмент оригинала (в конце) повторяется несколько раз! Только сейчас заметил... Вот последнее предложение: At that minute Finn noticed a mother with two kids leaving the school and approaching the Van.
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